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*Clementne's face close-up*
*Black screen with inscription: "This game series adaps to the choices you make. The story is tailored by how you play."* The sound of footsteps on the grass.*
Clementine: Not a step further! - she sent the gun at them.
Person 1: Hey relax kid, we won't harm you.
Person 2: Are you alone?
Clementine: ...
Person 1: Are you fucking blind? Do you see anybody else? - he said to his companion. - Look, little girl we can accompany you into our camp, we have a food. Are you hungry?
Clementine: Yes, I'm very hungry. (If Lee didn't said: "Don't trust anybody")
Person 1: Good! Oh... I mean, it's bad, but we can help, let's go.
They went. Person 1 talked about anything, Person 2 was rarely kept the conversation.
*Black screen with inscription: "Telltale games presents"*
Person 1: ...and then he beat his brains out! Holy shit, can you belive that?! ...
*"In association with SKYBOUND ENTERTAINMENT"*
Person 1: ...Hey kid, you like music? Of course you are. We have audio system who running on batteries!
They continued to walk, the sun is almost down.
Person 1: By the way what is your name? - he asked her.
Clementine: ...
Person 1: Well, I just thought that civilized people should observe good manners...
Clementine: My name is Clementine. (If Lee didn't said: "Don't trust anybody")
Person 1: Glad to meet you Clementine - he bowed awkwardly. - I'm...
Person 2: We have already come.
The camp was situated not far from the country road, it was a few trailers in which the poor live. The camp was surrounded by a high fence
Guard: Back already? Find anything?
Person 2: Not so much.
Guard: Who is this? She's armed.
Person 1: Don't worry, she with us, we found her on the way back, I don't know where she came from there, but she was the one. By the way this crowd broke into Savannah.
Guard: We know. Look - he turned to the girl - You must give me the weapon, otherwise I can't let you enter, these are the rules.
Clementine: *Silently stares*
Person 1: If you want to get food, you must surrender arms.
Clemntine thought, and then gave the guard her Colt M1911.
Guard: Good, you're welcome.
They entered the large camp, all this time was shouting people, they laughed and made a lot of noise. Clem saw about 15 people gathered in one place.
Clementine: What's going on?
Person 2: Something that should be. *Alarming music starts*
In the center of the camp stands handmade hangman, on the gallows wobbled loop, and at the bottom there was a little stool, on this stool put a man up, with hands tied behind his back, and a noose put around his neck. This guy, 24-26 years of age, was covered with scratches, his white T- shirt was slightly torn. People looked at it and rejoiced. Stool was too small, so the guy had to stand on one leg, and balance so as not to not hang himself. He met eyes with a Clem. *Alarming music reach climax* *Clementne's frightened face close-up*
*THE WALKING DEAD*
Sun village, people went to their trailers. Clementine chews something. Her eyes were still wet with tears, and the wound in her heart was too painfully. Then she turned and saw again hanget man. She came closer, and saw that he was still alive and trying to stand on one leg.
Hanget man: *whisper* Hey... hey you. Come here, please. Can you help me?
She stood still.
Hanget man: Holy shit, do you hear me?
Clementine turn, and slowly began to move backwards.
Hanget man: You little dumbass!!! - suddenly he stumbled and almost fell off the stool.
Clementine continued to go away from him.
Hanget man: *panic* Hey, What...? No, no, no, please baby don't leave me here. I can't hold on too long. This people, they are... they are bad, understand? They are dangerous, you must leave this place, and I can help you.
Clementine stopped and turn to him.
Hanget man: But first, you must help me. You will?
Clementine: *whisper* Okay.
Hanget man: Thank you sweety, now listen me...
Gameplay starts, you must looking for items that will help Clementine to release you. (as like in the ending of episode 5) Besides you must balance the left and right by pressing Q or E (as like in Tony Howk games). But if you lose your balance, then rope will suffocate you, and you will see the red "You are dead" screen.

*Inscription: "Episode 6 (name of episode)"*

P.S. I think would be cool to use this soundtrack in the ending of this episode http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mssm8Ml5sOo

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  • Wow... that would make an awesome beginning. Nice writing, really.
    Hmmmm that would solve the problem with having a new main character quite well.

  • It works a lot better then a lot of ideas I have thought of and it would introduce the main character pretty well and I am fully aware that I have said this before but screw it is that good.

  • @Bioshock Infinite WD said: It works a lot better then a lot of ideas I have thought of and it would introduce the main character pretty well and I am fully aware that I have said this before but screw it is that good.



    Thank you, besides, I wanted to show, that Clementine's childhood and her dreams about kindness ends now. It's brutal, but it's a true The Walking Dead style.

  • How have you taken her kindness, she is trying to save a hanging man... the opposite of brutal. If she was like that she would be joining in the Voodoo dancing execution to satan?

  • @Shrewsbury Survivor said: How have you taken her kindness, she is trying to save a hanging man... the opposite of brutal. If she was like that she would be joining in the Voodoo dancing execution to satan?



    No, I didn't mean that Clem becomes evil, I mean that she saw how cruel people can be to each other, as people could rejoice, and be laughing watching the death of the person. Her last hopes about kindness of people are collapsing now.

  • Ahh... I can see that a little but I dont think that should completly happen. She should realise there is some. She just knows there are bad people. A lesson learnt with the stranger

  • @Shrewsbury Survivor said: Ahh... I can see that a little but I dont think that should completly happen. She should realise there is some. She just knows there are bad people. A lesson learnt with the stranger



    Children in her age like molten metal, of which you can forge anyone, so she needs a good man who will become her life-coach, until it was too late.

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