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Drama! Can You Guys Help Me Out?

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Alright, so I have to write a movie for a year-long project in animation school, and it's a drama about a guy turning into a werewolf. While he's transforming, he hallucinates appearing into his own mind and talking to his psyche. I have two ideas for the movie's closing line and I'm not sure which one to use. Sam represents the werewolf, and Max represents the psyche. Here is the first line:

And here is the second:

Which line do you think is better? Can you think of a better one?

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