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Collaborative Comic: Torpedo Rock: Detective for Hire

posted by tredlow on - last edited by Jennifer - Viewed by 2K users

Basic rules, been done in most forums; I make a page of a comic, and then the next poster makes the next one continuing it. GO.

Oh, right. Here's the first one.

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Yeah, yeah. I suck at art. GO.

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    You may want to restate your "sucking" at art sentence.
    Here's an example on how to suck at art!

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    Hope I didn't ruien the art style much ^^; Also I really like drawing this character so I hope this continues.

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    This is like sex to my eyes ._.

  • I can't draw it at the moment, but I hope you don't mind me suggesting what happens next.

    Panel 1: Wide panel closeup of Torpedo face. Annoyed eyes. White text saying, "Don't say this is ANOTHER trap..."

    Panel 2: Wide panel of the back of Torpedo looking at the whole view of the truck
    There is a black puddle at the back with black ooze all over the walls and floor.

    Panel 3: Torpedo crouches down and ponders the puddle.
    Saying "Hmmm... this puddle looks deeper than what it should be"

    Panel 4: Close up of Torpedo about to poke puddle with his finger

    Panel 5: Puddle latches onto Torpedo's hand

    Panel 6: In a panic Torpedo tries to pull his arm out

    Panel 7: The puddle latches onto his leg and pulls him in even more

    Panel 8, 9 and 10: begins sinking in a dramatic fashion, with finally his other hand poking out from the puddle.

  • @SillyStell said:
    Hope I didn't ruien the art style much ^^;.

    Whaat? Are you kidding? It's awesome! Also, it's pretty fast! What software do you use?

    @SillyStell said: I can't draw it at the moment, but I hope you don't mind me suggesting what happens next.

    Panel 1: Wide panel closeup of Torpedo face. Annoyed eyes. White text saying, "Don't say this is ANOTHER trap..."

    Panel 2: Wide panel of the back of Torpedo looking at the whole view of the truck
    There is a black puddle at the back with black ooze all over the walls and floor.

    Panel 3: Torpedo crouches down and ponders the puddle.
    Saying "Hmmm... this puddle looks deeper than what it should be"

    Panel 4: Close up of Torpedo about to poke puddle with his finger

    Panel 5: Puddle latches onto Torpedo's hand

    Panel 6: In a panic Torpedo tries to pull his arm out

    Panel 7: The puddle latches onto his leg and pulls him in even more

    Panel 8, 9 and 10: begins sinking in a dramatic fashion, with finally his other hand poking out from the puddle.

    EDIT: I drew a page based on your suggestion, but if you feel like drawing it yourself feel free. I kinda want to see your art style.
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  • Awesom looking page! And I've got a good idea how to continue. Now let's see if I'm quick enough! Though if someone posts before me no worries :D

  • @tredlow: Thats awesome. Pretty much exactly how I pictured it.
    (Though if I had done it, it would have been a pencil doodle! XD (Not very good at drawing, plus I can't draw all too well on my laptop!)

    Excellent follow up too, I'm already drawn in, and I really want to know what happens next! :D

    (Once I get a few things sorted, I might give it a go later on at least)

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    WOW! This page REALLY sucks. I'll go slower next time D: Oh! And I just noticed you asked what software I use. I use Photoshop CS5 with a graphics tablet.

  • Awesome page! The plot thickens!
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    Also, this comic needs a title. What do you guys think it should be?

  • Torpedo Rock: Detective for Hire
    (Well, its a start...)

    Also, we need a full page of those head guys launching Torpedo towards the "screen" incredibly fast, with Torpedo clutching to the edges of his bubble, screaming something like.
    "I CAN'T HOLD ON MUCH LONGER!!!"

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