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If Ep. 4 was 5 minutes long and 100% honest

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EXT - SAVANNAH STREET

The groups is walking through the streets of Savannah to set themselves up for danger later on.

CLEM
Can't I at least hold the walkie-talkie? You
haven't even asked me who the guy I
was talking to is or explained why
he is dangerous.

LEE
I said no. We're not following
that plot until the final episode.

CLEM
Okay.

CHRISTA
Remember me and Omid? We had the
distrust for total strangers last
episode? Now we're following you and
want your permission to rest.

KENNY
Since I only care for or disregard
other people's lives when it
creates tension, I'm going to say
no. We move to the boat.

LEE makes a decision that quickly becomes pointless when he looks up and
sees MOLLY ringing bell towers.

LEE
I'm going to attract attention to the group by screaming at that
mysterious figure I just saw.

BEN
I'm going to be as annoying as
possible this episode so I'll start by
questioning if you saw anything for no apparent reason.


CHUCK sees some zombies while everybody is ignoring the fact
a loud bell is ringing like it's dinner time and their the meal.

CHUCK
I'm a drunk homeless man but I'm
going to say an archaic quote to
draw people's attention instead of
something like "Run! Walkers are
coming."

LEE
I got you, Chuck. Run everybody!


Untold amounts of walkers appear from seemingly nowhere and
the group gets surrounded. For no logical reason CLEM and BEN get
separated from the rest of the group and get trapped. BEN
runs instead of easily saving CLEM so you hate him more.
LEE unloads unlimited amount of ammo to kill the walkers
around CLEM but still fails. CHUCK the drunk intellectual
saves CLEM.

CHUCK
Go on ahead! I'll hold them off. Don't worry about me. I'll be fine.

LEE
I just met you last episode and you were kind of a dick with the whole "she's going to die" thing so yeah...

CHUCK
Don't try to save me.

LEE ignores the minor character and runs away. The group
finds a house and after an easy puzzle LEE unlocks the doggie
door. CLEM goes through it and opens the door.

CLEM
Ta da! I was frightened of walkers
finding us in the backyard but I
suddenly had no fear when running into
a dark house alone were I might be trapped with one. By the way, I'm
going to be pretty much doing
whatever I want all episode to
setup the plot for the next. But
I'll do useful things so you don't
get too annoyed until then.

LEE
Don't ever risk your life again!

CLEM
You hurt my feelings. I hope you feel guilty for acting like a responsible adult.

CHRISTA
I'm judging you for being so harsh on her
even though the last episode I
judged you for putting her in
danger.

They walk into the house.

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  • :rolleyes: @Red Panda said: INT - DOCKS


    KENNY
    You're probably the WOMAN that's
    the MAN that's been fucking with us
    on the radio!

    MOLLY
    Hey old man, didn't I just explain
    I'm the edgy action girl? You
    better get that finger out of my
    face!

    Best part! lol

    Also, so Lee's in sewer... What happens next!?:eek:

  • Love this :D :D :D

    Can't wait for next part!

  • I agree with Asari. That was probably the stupidest moment of the episode.

  • INT - SEWER

    LEE wanders around fucking SEWERS looking for a way out.

    LEE
    First a ninja and now I'm wandering
    around in sewers. The only way this
    could be more ridiculous is if I
    found a secret lair.

    LEE continues wandering and finds some walkers, completes a
    puzzle to distract them, and sees the body they were eating
    is CHUCK!

    LEE
    This is the least likely place I'd
    expect to find you or anybody.
    Seriously, what are the chances? I
    guess now the player will have
    closure on the hobo's departure.
    It looks like you had a terrible death
    and for that nobody in the group
    will ever mention your demise and
    we'll act like you never existed after
    you gave your life to save
    everyone. And I'm taking your gun.
    Yeah, you died for some assholes.

    LEE approaches a walker blocking the path out of the sewer
    when another walker reaches out from the ground and grabs
    his leg.

    LEE
    Really? What the fuck. What is
    under a sewer? Another sewer? How
    the hell did it even get in there?

    LEE frees himself and kills the walker blocking his path. He
    attempts to escape and discovers an underground lair.

    GARY WHITTA
    (British accent)
    I thought an underground lair would
    be cool. The game is so dark I
    thought the players would enjoy
    something absurdly unrealistic.

    LEE is stunned silent.

    INT - UNDERGROUND LAIR!

    LEE enters the underground lair and finds months worth of
    food. He hasn't eaten in a long time but doesn't try to eat
    or take any food.

    Danger is around every corner but he opens a door leading
    into the next room without any forethought and finds a group
    of survivors. Everybody looks at each other shocked.

    LEE
    Hello... This is awkward.

    VERNON pulls a gun on LEE. Despite months of seeing the
    worse possible things VERNON is still squeamish at the thought
    of death.

    LEE
    I don't want any trouble. I just
    need a doctor and someone that
    knows the city for the rest of the
    story. I'm pretty sure it's one of
    you.

    VERNON
    Are you from Crawford? I lived in
    Crawford and so have all the people
    I'm with. We don't recognize you
    and it's weird you'd be travling
    alone but we suspect you.

    BRIE
    He's from Crawford! Kill him!

    LEE
    The Crawford thing again? I'm not
    from Crawford.

    BRIE
    Kill him! He's from Crawford.

    LEE
    ...

    VERNON
    I'm sorry, we need to create
    tension so I'm going to threaten to
    kill you now.

    LEE
    You're not going to kill me. I know
    a killer when I see one. I don't
    see it in your eyes. Plus your
    hands are shaking and you look
    scared. Listen to my soothing Hulu
    guy voice while I, a stranger you
    think is dangerous, take the gun
    right out of your hand.

    LEE takes the gun from VERNON.

    LEE
    I'm not going to hurt you.

    VERNON
    You're really not from Crawford?
    Let me explain my entire back
    story.

    He explains the back story.

    VERNON
    Also, I'm a doctor and I know how
    to get you back home safely.
    Everything you need right now!

    LEE
    That's convenient. Let's go.

    VERNON
    I can't say yes that easy. I need
    to create some tension.

    BRIE
    You shouldn't help him. Let him
    die!

    LEE
    Do you ever shut up?

    BRIE
    No. I need to annoy you so
    the player won't care when
    I die a violent death later.

    LEE
    Vernon, I need your help. Do it
    because of Clem. Or because I'll
    kill everybody.

    VERNON
    I was ready to kill you moments ago
    but now I'll risk my life by
    venturing out in the city full of
    walkers to help you.

    LEE
    Don't worry. We'll just use a cut
    scene to avoid the walkers that
    chased me in here and any other
    dangers.

    [RIGHT] CUT TO:[/RIGHT]

    INT - RANDOM HOUSE

  • @Red Panda said: INT - SEWER

    LEE wanders around fucking SEWERS looking for a way out.

    LEE
    First a ninja and now I'm wandering
    around in sewers. The only way this
    could be more ridiculous is if I
    found a secret lair.

    LEE continues wandering and finds some walkers, completes a
    puzzle to distract them, and sees the body they were eating
    is CHUCK!

    LEE
    This is least likely place I'd
    expect to find you or anybody.
    Seriously, what are the chances? I
    guess now the palyer will have
    closure. Nobody in the group
    will ever mention your death and
    we'll act like you never existed after
    you gave your life to save
    everyone. And I'm taking your gun.

    I'm so glad the palyer got closure on chuck. He/She/It has really been wondering about him;):p but cool story update...THO you are closer to 25ish mins now:)

  • Lol I had a good chuckle. Ignore the fanbois TC

    @bdawgnit

    Whaa whaaa qq 'tho' 'tho'
    U mad? U mad.

  • More please :D This forums needs a like or +Rep system

  • @K0t0 said: Lol I had a good chuckle. Ignore the fanbois TC

    @bdawgnit

    Whaa whaaa qq 'tho' 'tho'
    U mad? U mad.

    what now....I'm unable to translate...must be troll!

    and no internet never makes me mad;) but thanks for checking up on me....you are too kind :rolleyes:

  • Haha this is still extremely entertaining Red. :D
    *crossing fingers for more*

  • This is actually really good, keep it up! I love how Gary Whitta makes an appearance :D

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