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Rain starts to fall on a traffic free road, not that traffic has been a problem, really, since everyone is dead and dead people don't drive. Just thought I'd throw that in there. The only things moving are the undead roaming free as a dog on one of those adjustable leashes. One of them spots a fresh corpse laying near some tire tracks, it's zero's in on the smell of blood because spotting the corpse wasn't enough--he has to smell the corpse also to find it and he is a few feet away which helps with the spotting and smelling and I like using "and" a lot and it's about to dive on top to start it's first meal in days, when the back of it's head explodes...
Damn that was close! Carley thinks to herself...the effort to snatch the gun that Lee clearly picked up and took with him on the RV and shoot had taken more effort than was put into this sentence, she thought, especially to aim it properly, with blood clouding her vision she couldn't tell how bad her punctuation was or how bad she looked she only felt a burning hot sharp pain in her left cheek, he had suddenly gone from Carley to Carl and his head was spinning as well a possible concussion from her fall to the ground...or from turning back to a girl.
Carley crawled slowly to a nearby tree to prop her self up, she hoped the walker she affectionaly named kenny and stomped on leaves sprinkled all over her would give her some time to react to any curious walkers...that made sense because I was really high on drugs when I wrote this.[/B] Ben....what the hell had he done ? [B]I mean, I know what he done, but it be one of them "Rhetorical" questions. Really, WHAT had he done? I'm really high. why would he steal ? Why would I come to that conclusion after defending his innocence? why did lilly shoot me ?! WHY? Is it because she thought I was stealing and I called her a bitch? No, couldn't be that. And why do I ask such stupid questions? Umm... Carley's brain couldn't take it and she fell asleep..