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FAN FICTION (If Carley and Lee both survived)

posted by CarleyandLeeTWD on - last edited - Viewed by 192 users

NOTE: This is to make some folks sad about Carley's passing get over it. So not much people would be sad anymore, but still remember her w/o that feeling.

So if you wanna see a decrease in people making posts about her (although there is nothing wrong since many people love her/like her (FICTION TURNS TO REALITY), what I'm just saying is 1 whole fan-fic thread instead of multiple threads/etc)

Basically, you are a writer who will create a fan fiction without them dyin'. Like Red Panda's old post.

(Why Carley? There seems to be many people who want to see happy stuff. It's not like people wanna see fan fiction about Jolene or minor characters who didn't have much screen time. If people are sad about lets say Brenda St. John's death, then let's make a thread for her.)

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EXAMPLE (I'm not a writer, so make do with it) (You can create your own scenes. I'm gonna make my example the RV Scene)

Lilly: You could just tell me it was Carley and it'd be all over. Done.

Lee: There would be no way it would be Carley. She's a great person and trustworthy. I know her and have been with her through a lot, and she has too. I can tell she won't do such shit. Stop accusing her, Lilly. What's your basis on this, anyway?

Carley: Thank you, Lee.

Lilly: Whatever! So what about that? Presidents and highly trusted officials do the same thing sometimes and screw up, so what's wrong with accusing her?

Lee: It's not her Lill-

Carley: Thank you, Lee. That's enough. What's up with you anyway? Stop treating pushing me and ben around.

Lilly: I need to find that traitor who has been giving stolen supplies. Don't act like some dumb a**holes. Ben, you could also tell me it was you and EVERYTHING ELSE WILL BE FINE!!

Ben: What's up with all this shit? It wasn't me as I said awhile ago! Stop accusing me.

Lilly: And what if it was you or Carley?

Carley: Stop accusing me! Back off!

Ben: I swear it wasn't me!! Don't kick me out of the group! Please!

Lilly: You both have until we reach that stupid train station to tell me who the hell it was. Carley, you could just tell me it was you and everything will be fine.

Lee: Fuck you, Lilly! She's someone who would never do that. Has she done any evil act so far? NO. She won't do such thing. Stop accusing her and treating her like she's some kind of messed up person!

(Carley will remember that!) (slight blush from Carley) (Lilly will remember what you called her.)

Lilly: Get out of this Lee! You are not part of this. It's only between Me, Carley and Ben. You are just some kind of spectator. And Fuck me? Fuck yourself, you fool. What if Carley or Ben was the one? Your jaw will drop and I'd laugh when you'd say I'm right.


Lee: And what if it was not them? I'd laugh in your face too. Don't insult them, Lilly. If you'd hurt them, hurt me first you wrecked piece of--

Lilly: LEE! Enough of this. Get the fuck out. I have the right to do this. You are also some f*cked up person. I'm trying to find out who the traitor is. Just give me some peace and quiet and let me SPEAK!

Lee: So do I have a right! What if it was someone sneaking in our camp, huh?

Lilly: SHUT UP!!

(not much about them, but at least it makes people remember that Lee cares about carley and vice versa. hope this example makes people happy)

then something like Ben reveals it was him but Carley defends him and Lilly pulls the gun out and tries to shoot her but Lee shields her and takes a bullet to the shoulder.
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Something like that! but of course it needs to be realistic and such. not like katjaa dodges a bullet matrix and Kenny gets bitten but has super powers and does a fusrohdah whatever.

KTHXBYE.

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  • Very nice. I like how Lee tells Lilly off to defend Carley. If you want, you can post this onto the website www.fanfiction.net that's where most of the TWD Game fanfics are.

  • It was pretty good. Just when Lilly and Lee are arguing near the end, I thought it was kinda repetitive.

  • Lee: Fuck you, Lilly! She's someone who would never do that. Has she done any evil act so far? NO. She won't do such thing. Stop accusing her and treating her like she's some kind of messed up person!

    Lilly would shoot Lee just like she shot Carley. There fore, everything you write after this line is invalid. And I know you're not a writer, but the characters in this don't seem to act like they should. Ben is all like "wtf is dis shit", Lee is pretty much over-praising Carley as a great person and Carley is all like "Thx Lee everyone should listen to you big guy <3"
    That's my criticism.

  • Idk, but ben was overreacting and defensive about it.
    Okay ill edit it again.

    Wait wait im leaving for a trip so imma edit when i get to hongkong

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    I kinda laughed. I mean, I get what you were going for and all, but lines like "Presidents and highly trusted officials do the same thing sometimes and screw up, so what's wrong with accusing her?" were just really bad.

    But you said you weren't a writer, so just know I'm not trying to hate on you or anything. Just thought it was a little funny. People REALLY want Carley to survive.

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