Drama! Can You Guys Help Me Out? [Archive]

UberMan5000

05/27/2006, 03:24 pm

Alright, so I have to write a movie for a year-long project in animation school, and it's a drama about a guy turning into a werewolf. While he's transforming, he hallucinates appearing into his own mind and talking to his psyche. I have two ideas for the movie's closing line and I'm not sure which one to use. Sam represents the werewolf, and Max represents the psyche. Here is the first line:

http://www.telltalegames.com/samandmax/comics/5709997

And here is the second:

http://www.telltalegames.com/samandmax/comics/5710212

Which line do you think is better? Can you think of a better one?

Emily

05/27/2006, 05:00 pm

It's a little hard to take the psyche seriously with that big grin on his face! :))

I think I like the first one better.

leon101

05/27/2006, 07:55 pm

Agreed, the first one is better. That grin is the best though :)) How can I not laugh. Especially when it has to do with blood.