Originally Posted by SillyStell
Hope I didn't ruien the art style much ^^;.
Whaat? Are you kidding? It's awesome! Also, it's pretty fast! What software do you use?
Originally Posted by RetroVortex
I can't draw it at the moment, but I hope you don't mind me suggesting what happens next.
Panel 1: Wide panel closeup of Torpedo face. Annoyed eyes. White text saying, "Don't say this is ANOTHER trap..."
Panel 2: Wide panel of the back of Torpedo looking at the whole view of the truck
There is a black puddle at the back with black ooze all over the walls and floor.
Panel 3: Torpedo crouches down and ponders the puddle.
Saying "Hmmm... this puddle looks deeper than what it should be"
Panel 4: Close up of Torpedo about to poke puddle with his finger
Panel 5: Puddle latches onto Torpedo's hand
Panel 6: In a panic Torpedo tries to pull his arm out
Panel 7: The puddle latches onto his leg and pulls him in even more
Panel 8, 9 and 10: begins sinking in a dramatic fashion, with finally his other hand poking out from the puddle.
EDIT: I drew a page based on your suggestion, but if you feel like drawing it yourself feel free. I kinda want to see your art style.
My Friend: You know, if only Bruce Wayne was bit by a radioactive psychiatrist rather than a bat, Gotham wouldn't even need Arkham Asylum.
Me: Haha, yeah. That's true.
Me: Wait, Bruce Wayne was never bit by a radioactive anything.
Last edited by tredlow; 06/14/2011 at 09:15 am.