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Old 09/10/2011, 11:07 pm   #21
KuroShiro
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Originally Posted by KatieHal View Post
We definitely welcome feedback--my comment was joking and meant in good fun.

Although, to be fair, as we said, the line is actually from Shakespeare, so not *quite* high school poetry
I think that might have come out a bit harshly, and I know your response was in fun. I'm aware of the sources of your titles -- note that I said choices, not actual writing .

What I meant was more that it is the sort of thing I would have thought was a cool title back when I was 14 or 15. There's nothing inherently wrong with that if that's the audience you're aiming for, it just comes across as overly serious and kind of silly, as I said.
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