Sincerity isn't something you can really script. It might even just be me. But mostly, it just came through that way in the first half of the review. Some of it came through in the delivery, and some of it came from the fact that it felt like you were reaching a bit hard for things to get mad about.
But you know, on my second watch of the review, things flowed better than on the first watch and somehow what seemed insincere before came through a bit better, so maybe it is just me. Just tone down the yelling and the anger and you'll be fine. Being maniacal is fine; it worked for the "JUSTICE!" bit.
You're the greatest. The greatest! - GuruGuru214
You'll go far in this life, Fawful. - That Guy In The Wheelchair
Fawful, you sir, are made of win. - mgrant
I love the Fawful! - Davies
You're like a bad comedian. - monkey_05_06
**** you. - Giant Tope
Why do you have to be such an ***hole? - Avistew
You're a miserable little weasel who derives pleasure from being a ****. - AllenB
Grow up. - Mike Haley
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