Originally Posted by Macfly77
I've just read chapter three and I quite enjoy the story so far.
The tone is mostly right , the dialogue is pretty funny (and doesn't usually sound out of place with what the characters would usually say) and the story is quite intriguing.
There are some spelling mistakes and the grammar isn't perfect (as a native French speaker, I'm sure that mine isn't either
), but that doesn't really affect my enjoyment of the story.
Good job and keep'em coming!
Thanks you for the comment! You know, I'm not a native speaker, so of course some mistakes may happen. This is my first experience as a translator, so it's a challenging task, but it's really worth doing it. Anyway I checked the writing again and I already prepared a new edition which will be up soon. Thank you again, your comments help us improving our work.
Ok, so the mistakes are fixed. And a new chapter will be out soon, so enjoy it!