It's not 'bad writing' to use a 3rd-person omniscient narrator, regardless of whether that character remains removed from the action entirely or enters into the story in any capacity himself; it's only 'bad writing' if the story is...well...written badly.
This entire season is clearly intended to be framed like a 50s-60s Twilight Zone-style sci-fi/fantasy/horror/general weirdness television program (of which Twilight Zone was just the archetypal example: Outer Limits and Rod Serling's Twilight Zone follow-up Night Gallery come to mind as well); the Narrator is integral to creating the necessary tone and overall effect of one of those shows. The recurring Narrator, in addition to his actual narrative role, acts also as a linking device to demonstrate the union of all 5 parts of the story arc. Also, as a 3rd-person omniscient narrator, he has access to information that no one in the story can possibly know yet, so he can deal out ominous (well, mock-ominous anyway) foreshadowing, providing hints to future events (even if those hints turn out to be misleading or 'red herrings,' since that is another role of the Twilight Zone narrator). And of course, let's not forget one of the main components of the Serling-style narrator, the use of often wacky pseudo-morals and oddball aphorisms inserted at the episode's beginning and end (and often elsewhere as well), which are key to the overall Twilight Zone feel.
Remember folks, there are no absolute 'laws of narrative.' Everything hinges on the overall effect and the intended goal of the creator(s). If a literary technique or dramatic device moves the overall effect towards the author's ultimate goal, it works, and if it weakens the overall intended effect, then it is a mistake. Based on The Penal Code alone, the Narrator seems to fit perfectly into Telltale's plan for the season and therefore is clearly not an example of 'bad writing.' One doesn't have to like the Serling-esque storytelling model, but that is what Telltale is clearly trying to achieve here (albeit in a tongue-in-cheek, mocking fashion), so it isn't a fault of the writers, merely a preference of some of the players. Comme si, comme ça.
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