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*Hero1* · 02/23/2011, 05:41 pm

I've been doing some writing for this YouTube series.. I'd really appreciate if any of you could have a look and give me some feedback.. It is meant to be a lighthearted approach to some serious information.. anyway

http://www.youtube.com/diagnosishealth

is the channel!

Thanks in advance for anyone who checks it out!

GuybrushWilco · 02/23/2011, 05:55 pm

I watched the one about speech problems, and was sufficiently entertained and informed. Keep up the good work!

Davies · 02/23/2011, 05:57 pm

That's great man. I laughed at the start of the booty call episode and I think it's a great approach for getting young adults to listen to what's being said (heck, I watched the whole video and I have the attention span of a particularly unattentive goldfish). The host (was it Paul?) is very good too, as he comes across as likable. There's a couple of small criticisms I have about the photography but as you're a writer I'll spare you the details. After all, you seem to have done a bang up job mate. Nice one!

*Hero1* · 02/24/2011, 12:39 pm

Thanks for checking it out guys.. I really appreciate it! It is supposed to be like a dodgy d-grade show which is poorly cut..so that's all part of the charm

02/23/2011, 05:41 pm	#1
Hero1 conclusion jumper Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: melbourne, australia Posts: 1,766	My Youtube channel/show I've been doing some writing for this YouTube series.. I'd really appreciate if any of you could have a look and give me some feedback.. It is meant to be a lighthearted approach to some serious information.. anyway http://www.youtube.com/diagnosishealth is the channel! Thanks in advance for anyone who checks it out! __________________ Patience is a sharp razor to swallow...

02/23/2011, 05:57 pm	#3
Davies The Marmite of this site Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Outside your window, staring in with malicious intent... Posts: 1,465	That's great man. I laughed at the start of the booty call episode and I think it's a great approach for getting young adults to listen to what's being said (heck, I watched the whole video and I have the attention span of a particularly unattentive goldfish). The host (was it Paul?) is very good too, as he comes across as likable. There's a couple of small criticisms I have about the photography but as you're a writer I'll spare you the details. After all, you seem to have done a bang up job mate. Nice one! __________________ NEWEST - A reading of a short horror story written by Davies. ======================= NEW - The very first official episode of Davies' new show; 'One Man & His Cock'. ======================= Davies sings Portal's 'Still Alive'. ======================= Cockerel sings Portal 2's 'Want You gone', for Alcoremortis (feat. MC Layton). ======================= Davies sings 'I Wanna Be Like You' (from the Jungle Book). Last edited by Davies; 02/23/2011 at 06:00 pm.

02/24/2011, 12:39 pm	#4
Hero1 conclusion jumper Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: melbourne, australia Posts: 1,766	Thanks for checking it out guys.. I really appreciate it! It is supposed to be like a dodgy d-grade show which is poorly cut..so that's all part of the charm __________________ Patience is a sharp razor to swallow...

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02/23/2011, 05:55 pm	#2
GuybrushWilco Pirate Janitor Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: USA Posts: 437	I watched the one about speech problems, and was sufficiently entertained and informed. Keep up the good work!