An Abandoned Carley Fanfiction

[Red Panda]

Here's a piece I wrote in which Carley lives and teams up with this guy, Avery. She wants to reconnect with the group, he wants to head to the mountains, and it follows their journey.

I wrote the very beginning but I left it alone in favor of some other projects. I have the story planned out but don't intend on finishing it. Still, I'd hate to see it be for not so I thought I'd share what I have.

FADE IN:

EXT. LONG ROAD - NIGHT

A walker is shuffling towards a body (Carley) on the side of
the road.

CLOSE UP: The walker leans in to take the first bite when
suddenly it stops moving.

REVEAL: A MAN (Avery) pulls a large knife from the back of
it's head and the body falls over.

AVERY starts to search CARLEY'S pockets quickly and
methodically for anything scavangable. Nothing. He rips open
her shirt to search her bra. He puts his hand in her cup
when CARLEY grabs his arm.

AVERY pushes on her chest to pin her, CARLEY moans in pain,
and he lifts up his knife to drive through her head when she
speaks.

CARLEY
(weak voice)
Help me...

AVERY pauses for a beat then lowers his weapon.

AVERY
Hey, my name Avery. I'll help you
out as best as I can but I need you
to listen to me. What's your name?

CARLEY
Carley.

AVERY
Carley, where do you feel pain?

CARLEY
My left cheek.

CARLEY sits ups, wincing in pain.

AVERY
Does it hurt anywhere else?

CARLEY
No.

AVERY looks around for walkers. He starts digging in his
backpack and pulls out bottle of pills. He opens it, takes a pill
out, and puts the bottle back in his backpack. He presents
CARLEY with the pill and a water canteen.

AVERY
It's a painkiller and some water.
It's the best I can do for you
right now. That gun shot is going
to bring Dummies. We need to get
moving. Can you walk?

CARLEY
Yeah, I think so.

CARLEY stands up. Suddenly AVERY grabs her arms and binds her
hand with rope.

CARLEY
What the hell do you think you're
doing?

AVERY
(pushes her)
Move

.

[TheNNerdGamer]

Wtf

[Zeruis]

Eh, it's alright. Call me biased, but I've seen enough Carley revival fanfics. There's the "We're Alive" crossover as well as Milo's fic on the Carley Facebook (which is awesome). There's also a fanfic that has wiped out Carley's death completely on ff.net:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8480643/1/A-New-Day

Avery sounds like he's a hick.

[Milosuperspesh]

hey panda you already did one and it got closed

link here, seriously you want to go through all that again ?

http://www.telltalegames.com/forums/...ad.php?t=34909

then there is your rather odd 'summary thread' here

http://www.telltalegames.com/forums/...ad.php?t=36427

ps

i did 2 more bits to my carley fan fic no likes on them so i dunno if anyone read the updates lol i'm tempted to post it on the forums

[Red Panda]

Originally Posted by Zeruis

I've seen enough Carley revival fanfics.

I agree on that, which is why I dropped it.

[Milosuperspesh]

yet you still posted it up...

[skepticalguy90]

Post it on the forums, I'd read it.

[Milosuperspesh]

or you can just use my sig's facebook link to savecarley and the fan fic should be at the top of the page

[skepticalguy90]

Originally Posted by Milosuperspesh

or you can just use my sig's facebook link to savecarley and the fan fic should be at the top of the page

Yeah, but I'm sort of lazy :P

[xXNinjaScoreXx]

More Carley threads, of course, don't people ever think about anything else?