2/10.
You kick it off not only by claiming to be a pony, but by as the same trite Doctor Who joke that everyone and their dog has done some variation on. While I love Doctor Who as much as the next person, the fandom as a whole needs to collectively begin to make more clever references, rather than repeat the same one over and over to the point of exhaustion.
Links to your other profiles on the internet, as you have in the second line, don't necessarily harm a signature, but still, best to avoid them or put them on your main profile if possible. (Also, who still has a Blogspot I mean really what's next Friendster) And phrased the way it is, I can tell it's supposed to be a joke, or some sort of reference, but I honestly can't tell exactly where the humor lies. Needs work.
Self-deprecation! I like that. However, when you're talking about how boring you are, and it's absolutely true, it's not really a good thing. And what necessitated the use of a third line? Could this not have gone somewhere on the second? That would have made that line more cluttered, yes, but it would have consolidated space overall.
In all, I have to give you an F-minus on this one. I'm sorry, but you'll need to work harder if you want to pass your next exam.
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